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Short 1A Video
« on: November 29, 2007, 02:02:29 AM »
This is a quick video I made of some of my favorite tricks at the moment so I wouldn't forget them.

I debated posting this video, simply because I made it so quickly, but I am really curious what people think of my tricks. So, if you will, post comments, good or bad.

I really need some feedback.

[youtube=425,350]fEczW9kLoAc[/youtube]

Youtube:
http://youtube.com/watch?v=fEczW9kLoAc

Download: (Thanks Schalicto for hosting)
http://www.schalicto.com/organizer/Fave.mp4

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Re: Short 1A Video
« Reply #1 on: November 29, 2007, 03:48:32 AM »
Really really really smooth. I also liked most of the tricks. O0
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Re: Short 1A Video
« Reply #2 on: November 29, 2007, 02:45:03 PM »
First trick was pretty cool, but short. The second trick was ruined by the hourglass mount part. The chopsticks elemnt in the third trick wasnt very fitting of the rest of the trick. The kamikaze type move in that trick was insane, but that cross arm thing is the most useless thing ever. Fourth trick pretty much ruled. Fifth trick could totally be expanded on. Sixth trick had an insane slack and some ok filler. I normally would hate any trick like the last but it was performed way to flawlessly to hate. Overall you have a great style and smoothness but I just found some low points for you to look at IMO.
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Re: Short 1A Video
« Reply #3 on: November 29, 2007, 03:22:29 PM »
First trick was pretty cool, but short. The second trick was ruined by the hourglass mount part. The chopsticks elemnt in the third trick wasnt very fitting of the rest of the trick. The kamikaze type move in that trick was insane, but that cross arm thing is the most useless thing ever. Fourth trick pretty much ruled. Fifth trick could totally be expanded on. Sixth trick had an insane slack and some ok filler. I normally would hate any trick like the last but it was performed way to flawlessly to hate. Overall you have a great style and smoothness but I just found some low points for you to look at IMO.
I agree some of the tricks werent as cool. ( but still really cool)
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Re: Short 1A Video
« Reply #4 on: November 29, 2007, 04:46:25 PM »
Being a Noob I was impressed,  I keep practicing but still no smoothness.  The first trick was easily my favorite.

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Re: Short 1A Video
« Reply #5 on: November 30, 2007, 12:16:40 AM »
The second trick was ruined by the hourglass mount part.

You are entitled to your own opinions and such, and of course, we don't agree on everything because I made up these tricks cause I like them.

But I am fairly sure that there is no mount reminiscent of hour glass in the second trick. Care to get more specific?

Thanks for your comments everyone!

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Re: Short 1A Video
« Reply #6 on: November 30, 2007, 01:39:26 AM »
i enjoyed it new and smooth cool man keep it up also tut's if you have time i love learning others tricks and i make my own but not as good as yours
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Re: Short 1A Video
« Reply #7 on: November 30, 2007, 02:25:37 AM »
i enjoyed it new and smooth cool man keep it up also tut's if you have time i love learning others tricks and i make my own but not as good as yours
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I have some trick tutorials on my tutorial youtube account.

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